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Free of Style

#1 MCi (User)Apr 1, 2011, 11:03 am

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I was bored, I opened Youtube, looked a beat to freestyle to. I thought I'd recored it, as a first try. I want you people to be critics over my accent/voice/flow/words, and whatever there is to criticize.



Listen to it with low volume, because it's recorded with a Computer-Mic which sucks balls, so I'm sorry about the quality.

Lyrics:


emmm yeahhh yeh yeh
sighh.... its yo man issa
straight frm JEROME..
YEAH

I bought this book of how to rap
coz im caught, n shook in crap
im crap, i fukin feel like handicapped
i screw up like a fukin dick i lack
bt idont fukin care, ima freestyle
if u aint aware im free of style
i do this wiv no style but wiv smile
never frownin. coz i love wt i do
ill be crowned coz u ppl do too
ull be talkin of how i influenced u
givin ppl clues of how to rock a beat
wiv lyrics that eats off ur meat
cheek rednin leakin a red thing
im killin like a king of this rink
to everyth im linked,

my breath stinked
bt i still got u hearin it with victory inked
this aint mimiced its created,
its a piece of my mind on a plate mate
don hate, none of us chooses their fate
i didnt kno this wt was waitin
bt since thru it im goin.. mindz ima be blowin
lyrical equations i be flowin. spittin while im growin
i want fanz of the underground
not lilwayne'z or biebers haters amount
i'd go wiv one fan tht understands a real sound



O lol by the way, my voice's usually better, but I'm suffering the flu.
#2 cypress (User)Apr 1, 2011, 12:27 pm

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I think you should work with your accent.
record quality was shit but your voice was OK and I like it.
first verse is good and completely match with beat but the second one isn't and words.....I can't say anything about it because I'm not good in English.

keep it up man !




A fine day to exit...

#3 MCi (User)Apr 1, 2011, 2:52 pm

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Props: 4
I tried going fast on the second part to show I can, I ignored the beat completely at that point.
#4 eminemgurl (User)Apr 1, 2011, 10:08 pm

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It was pretty good... like cypress said work on your accent a bit and you have the flu but otherwise it was pretty good :D


Bitch Imma kill youQ
#5 DSounds (User)Apr 2, 2011, 11:20 am

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Yeah you gotta work on the quality because it's too terrible that I can barely understand what you're saying. Flow was cool, lyrics were nice, delivery needs some enhancement though. Overall, it's a shame that the quality was THIS horrible cuz this would've turned out to be a good track. Keep working on your music bro.
#6 MCi (User)Apr 2, 2011, 12:40 pm

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I told you, listen with low volume because it's A Computer-Microphone , hopefully I'll get some tools soon though, and thanks people!
#7 eminem2 (User)Apr 30, 2011, 9:47 am

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Thanks ;)
(The life of this world is but playing and an amusement. Surely, the Everlasting home is better for the cautious. Will you not understand? ) Quran

#8 melimathers (User)Apr 30, 2011, 1:26 pm

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it was good. the words were good. like everyone said just work on the accent
Imma tear this motherfuckin' roof off like two dogs caged.
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