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An Untold Story

#1 DSounds (User)Apr 2, 2011, 11:23 am

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"An Untold Story"
A vague concept that gradually grows to have a clearer form. The song displays through lyrical scenes a fragile character who's desperately trying to read some mysterious book. The grunge flavor is quite dominating in this piece.
Listen Here:

[Verse I]
This book hasn't been touched since countless years
A myth says it's the key to rinse boundless fears
Like the rains doing a camouflage to your tears
It's a story of grand mirage with more fierce
Effects than those of the most unfeigned
A story of falsity and gross one pain
That lost and vain erroneous invention;
"Humanity"...;within the phoniest dimension
Where the sentiment's suspensions sinfully
Strive, systematic sempiternal sins sully
Saintliness symphony; story of discernment
Will the lord offer glory for his servant?
Who's destined to fall and narrate the tale
His face is bale as if the f*** ing gate of hell
Is about to open as his hands touch the cover
He thought he did it but there's so much to suffer

[Hook] X2
Will the story remain untold...?
Or will the heavenly veil unfold...?

[Verse II]
A book devoured by many layers of dust
And he's amathophobic . The prayers are must
To help this amateur sole pick for a story teller
The stamina goes sick; what a gory filler
To this rough copy of his life he's a sheer soul
Without enough body, without a clear goal
He's tearful; trying so hard to just peruse
The abstruse story; there isn't much to lose
But there's a lot to gain for his rotten name (= rotten aim)
It's not in vain ; now he's got an aim (=got a name)
It's "Shame", and it seems no one is meant to reveal
Or feel the Real; it is mentally sealed

The reason lies inside your mind

[Hook] X2
Will the story remain untold...?
Or will the heavenly veil unfold...?
#2 MCi (User)Apr 2, 2011, 12:42 pm

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Are you from Jordan? What was very good! Keep em comin'
#3 SlimShadyX313X (User)Apr 7, 2011, 11:04 pm

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It was very good maby add 2 more lines for the hook

"That's Rock Bottom
When this life makes you mad enough to kill
That's Rock Bottom
When you want something bad enough to steal
That's Rock Bottom
When you feel you have had it up to here
Cause you mad enough to scream but you sad enough to tear"

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