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LonniE - Manipulating Bitch (Snippet)

#1 LonniE (User)Apr 26, 2011, 11:27 am

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Last night I just wanted to start rapping.
So this is one of my first try at it on english.
Please comment the flow and everything you find.

It was the first rec so turned out bad, saved only a snippet of the flow.

Lyrics so far.

[verse 1]
Your fucking sissy
I trusted you missy
You tryd to destroy everything I ever had
Nomather how sad you are, I will always be mad
Why the fuck did you turn your back like that
your fat bitch, I'm gonna burn down your fucking flat
If you ever talk to me again, i'mma kill ya, bitch!
Drop dead, *******, your fucking. snitch!
I know it's been a year since you let me down

But I still getting drown for that, clown
You manipulate me, for your own sake
The moment you lied i realized it was all fake
You cause me nothing but pain
bitch! You are the only one to blame
You aint worth shit to me now
Just drop dead bitch, pow (gunshot)

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#2 pins (Forum Moderator)Apr 26, 2011, 12:19 pm

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Like the flow, your english accent is good and dope lyrics so far :)
"They blame it on Marilyn, and the heroin, where were the parents at?"
#3 ekisde (Forum Moderator)Apr 26, 2011, 1:33 pm

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That beat is awesome, you produced it?
#4 LonniE (User)Apr 26, 2011, 1:34 pm

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@pins: Thank you =)

@ekisde: All you'd care about was the beat, nope. It's a freebeat.
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#5 melimathers (User)Apr 26, 2011, 1:53 pm

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Imma tear this motherfuckin' roof off like two dogs caged.
#6 BLuR (User)Apr 27, 2011, 8:39 am

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LonniE, How did U make the instrumental? I mean, what program did u use.

Btw, Dope song.
Eminem SUCKS!

#7 Gits star (Global Moderator)Apr 28, 2011, 3:02 am

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He said freebeat, so he used no prog to make the beat :P
#8 cartoon123 (User)Apr 28, 2011, 7:04 am

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Good job!!

Sorry for my bad English but I am from Greece!!!
#9 H o o D star (User)Apr 28, 2011, 5:01 pm

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BLuR Wrote:
LonniE, How did U make the instrumental? I mean, what program did u use.

*SIGH* High people... :P
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