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TooIllToKill vs. Sevo pages (1,2)

#1 TooillToKill (User)Sep 23, 2010, 3:53 pm

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Here man, finally gonna have a battle!

No rules homie

Here's my verse.

I'm serving you in your own house, call me delivery.
Swing wooden bats at me but homie you couldn't sliver me.
I'm nice to a bitch in a blouse, so i'll show you chivalry,
I keep it locked up and I won't give a key, to any mothafucka who lives with me.

I pass the blunt, yeah I give a tree but if your to my left i'll get right, skip you and sip some Hennessey. I pray on the living call me a zombie, I know you HAD a bitch but now she all on me, and she got a donkey, your just mad cause your hoe left with a honkey! Brain dead flow but ya'll couldn't BONK me.

I get the bread, ya'll are the lunch meat, I bring the swiss the mayo sprouts and the HEAT, Now were all toasted up, shake my crumbs on your feet, and were all posted up i go dumb on this beat, but you can't hear it cause your a bum in the street in fact my last line got you hungry to eat!


#2 Gits star (Global Moderator)Oct 23, 2010, 4:18 pm

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sevo? you not gonna responde?
#3 sevo star (Global Moderator)Oct 23, 2010, 5:09 pm

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Yes ofc, but just been busy. I haven't had time, too much studying..


#4 Gits star (Global Moderator)Oct 23, 2010, 7:16 pm

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ah, i see, hurry up! i wanna read and vote:)
#5 sevo star (Global Moderator)Oct 23, 2010, 9:28 pm

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Yo!
As I said, I haven't had time. So I just wrote a quick verse.
It's not very good, but it's my first battle, so who cares :)

I didn't understand much of what you said.
Some shit about my house, my hoe and a bread.
What you said can't be unsaid, and what I read can't be unread.
So I'll just kick my rhyme and let you go 'n make your death-bed.

When I joined this forum I saw that you made a thread,
about that you wanted to be a moderator.
Already then I knew I'd become a mod sooner or later.
Cuz my respect was raising like an esculator.
And your last line didn't make me hungry, I have a refrigerator.

Not Too-ill-To-Kill, Not Too-ill-To-Die.
Just sit-back-and-chill, while i stick my finger-in-your-eye.
Take out your eye and cook a special pie.
Don't think I'm a psychopathic guy,
But I just do these kind of shit when I am high.

Imma set you on "Stand-By" and just tell you Bye-Bye.


#6 darkshady (User)Oct 25, 2010, 7:37 am

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Well that was close...
But my vote to sevo....:)
#7 eminemgurl (User)Feb 3, 2011, 6:40 pm

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sevo :)


Bitch Imma kill youQ
#8 Gits star (Global Moderator)Feb 7, 2011, 9:53 pm

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TooillToKill: You play with the words nice, it's good, i like it!
it would be better to read if you could chop it up.
but, it was a overall a good diss!

Sevo: It was a nice comeback, you had good wordplay,
not many, but as you said, your first battle,
you only get better and better for each battle.
you putted it up nice, it was clean and easy to read.

So, overall, even though it was a little hard to read TooillToKill,
i liked the wordplay. So my vote goes to TooillToKill.
BUT it was a close call! both text was good.
#9 whiteredneck54 (User)Mar 9, 2011, 10:18 pm

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Yo il take u both. On my iPod. My name is Tyler fox bitch you don't know what to do here is one fact I love to dip and like to chew tobbaco I spit off my tractor Cus I'm a redneck with swagger I ate ur moms pussy like that shot was on fear factor
#10 H o o D star (User)Mar 10, 2011, 1:44 am

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whiteredneck54 Wrote:
Yo il take u both. On my iPod. My name is Tyler fox bitch you don't know what to do here is one fact I love to dip and like to chew tobbaco I spit off my tractor Cus I'm a redneck with swagger I ate ur moms pussy like that shot was on fear factor


That actually sucks ass :)
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