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#1 EightMile (User)Feb 9, 2011, 10:22 pm

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Like a member of D12 I've got a double personality
I'm a rapper from the top shelf, fucking with me only brings you fatality
Been trough a whole lot of shit, you understand my mentality?
Words so sharp, they slit, I'm hated because of my brutality

Rather fuck Amy Whinehouse than Quit, bringing them swagger rapper back to reality
You feel the fury when i spit, even with a rocket in your ass you can't reach my level
You don't deserve the credit, rhymes so high It's in space where i travel
Insane in the brain, entering a church dressed as the devil

you're just a stain, I'm blazing you off the map like a hurricane
You have been slain, stick the Mic upon your ass until you sound like Lil Wayne
No pain No Gain, even if you were the fucking Chinese wall you wouldn't sustain
I'm taking off like an airplane, writing lyrics that would even twist Einstein's brain

The feel me like the Big Bang, but this ain't Theory
Expanding my horizon, destroying anything in my way like a Bison
Even if i was blind i'd find the mic, knock 'em the fuck out like Tyson
Mind on my money like an oil Sheik, cause since everything is about cash my eyes turned green like a dollar bill





Gods are fragile things; they may be killed by a whiff of science or a dose of common sense....
#2 ekisde (Forum Moderator)Feb 10, 2011, 7:03 pm

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Wow man good job :O
My favourite
The feel me like the Big Bang, but this ain't Theory
Expanding my horizon, destroying anything in my way like a Bison
Even if i was blind i'd find the mic, knock 'em the fuck out like Tyson
Are you american?
#3 EightMile (User)Feb 11, 2011, 5:25 am

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Thx man;)

And no, I'm dutch ;)


Gods are fragile things; they may be killed by a whiff of science or a dose of common sense....
#4 sevo star (Global Moderator)Feb 11, 2011, 11:26 am

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I like that Lil Wayne part lol
Soundss good!
Keep up!

#5 EightMile (User)Feb 11, 2011, 4:09 pm

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Thanks


Gods are fragile things; they may be killed by a whiff of science or a dose of common sense....
#6 TooillToKill (User)Feb 12, 2011, 4:03 pm

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It was good man. A few things to work on.

Don't mimic Eminem so closely. You have your own talent.. Use it.

Think of it this way.. If you ever actually got a break and became a rapper would you be rapping about "D12" and stuff Eminem would say?

Probably not. The best thing I can tell you is to create your own persona and personality on the mic. That way you can be respected as an MC.


#7 EightMile (User)Feb 12, 2011, 4:31 pm

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Thx for the tips m8, i'll work on that ;)


Gods are fragile things; they may be killed by a whiff of science or a dose of common sense....
#8 SlimShadyX313X (User)Feb 19, 2011, 1:46 am

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Sounds good keep it up


"That's Rock Bottom
When this life makes you mad enough to kill
That's Rock Bottom
When you want something bad enough to steal
That's Rock Bottom
When you feel you have had it up to here
Cause you mad enough to scream but you sad enough to tear"


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